Guess what this is? (hint - it's edited)

Just got this today:

Let's open it and see what's in there, shall we?

Oh hey! It's an edited manuscript for Mentally Incontinent (the 2nd one)! And wouldn't you know it, there's not a single page of it that doesn't look like this. I am a horrid writer, and I think my editor is going to have me shot. For the first time since I was 19, I feel like I just failed English class.

At least he didn't use red pen.

***Update 9:23PM ***

Okay, Jeremy called me out. I photoshopped the photo above. Here it is as it was when it came to me: